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So, You Finally Put Out? by ~xoBearxo:iconxoBearxo:



One day you're sweet and pure,
now the next day you're a whore.
You thought he wouldn't tell,
but now your life's a living hell.
In your mind, sex would make him "love" you;
yet in his, you were just a simple hobby.
You have no respect for yourself,
so you thought he would have respect for you?
Sweetie, you were wrong,
and he played you like an old card game.
He's moving on without you,
finding a new mindless victim.
You sit alone and cry,
running the same thoughts over in your mind.
You thought he wanted to be with you,
that he cared about you.
Its something you regret,
and you're wishing to forget.
They say sex is a dangerous game,
and now you've learned the hard way.
©2008-2010 ~xoBearxo
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Author's Comments

This one is a work in progress, but I think you get the point I'm trying to get at.

I didn't write this about anyone and I'm not trying to make guys look bad lol. This is just an issue that happens everywhere, to girls and guys, and one that I seen a lot of in my school.

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:icontifalavigne:
It's a lesson much better learned through reading a poem than through actual experience. :]

Nice work! ^^

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Friendship is a single soul dwelling in two bodies.

:bulletred: - Aristotle - :bulletred:
:icontatdrummer:
Big up the whores! lol jk

It's really cool. Reminds me of a few people lol.

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IGNORE ME!

Kneel before Zod!
:iconlaffytaffy5:
This was great, and yes a lesson learnd the hard way woyld not be fun.. not that i shoule know..lol. You got your point across very nicely. Great poem.

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I Make My Hearts With Wings Because They Have A Tendancy To Fly Away.
:iconjohnshopkinsmed:
Good poem! :highfive: Well said.

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I love you. <3

The Game: You just lost it. Again.
:iconxobearxo:
Thank you!

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"Class dismissed. Homework for this evening is experiment the bodies intake of poisonous cleansing products, a golden star for the ones sent to the ER."
:spidey:
:iconxobearxo:
Thank you so much!

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"Class dismissed. Homework for this evening is experiment the bodies intake of poisonous cleansing products, a golden star for the ones sent to the ER."
:spidey:
:iconxobearxo:
Haha fuck off! jk. Same with me...hmmm...lol

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"Class dismissed. Homework for this evening is experiment the bodies intake of poisonous cleansing products, a golden star for the ones sent to the ER."
:spidey:
:iconxobearxo:
I agree. :) Thank you so much! :hug:

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"Class dismissed. Homework for this evening is experiment the bodies intake of poisonous cleansing products, a golden star for the ones sent to the ER."
:spidey:
:iconjohnshopkinsmed:
Most welcome! :hug:

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I love you. <3

The Game: You just lost it. Again.

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